tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post1506528574324908374..comments2009-08-13T10:37:52.314+05:30Padmanabh (आदि यायावर)http://www.blogger.com/profile/00743001936020943683noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-80259299419098140112009-08-13T10:37:52.314+05:302009-08-13T10:37:52.314+05:30<b>&quot;गामो कए रहल अछि शहरक देकसी,आब कतहु सादगी कोना भेंटत ?&quot;</b><br /><br />तथाकथित आधुनिकता पर व्यंग्यक संग एकटा यथार्थवादी रचना।कुन्दन कुमार मल्लिकhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03699865603391260097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-62713094619674765232009-07-03T16:08:14.029+05:302009-07-03T16:08:14.029+05:30वाह. मार्मिक आ यतार्थवादी रचना.सुभाष चन्द्रhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00163673662608636927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-74111463547375210592009-07-02T15:46:02.005+05:302009-07-02T15:46:02.005+05:30दुख:क ठोर पर हंसी कोना भेंटत ?जेकरा भाग्ये में अछि दुःख,ओकरा ख़ुशी कोना भेंटत ??<br /><br />Karan Samastipuri g..kaha to sahi hai apne..aur apki sari bate b sahi hai is poem me..aur apki rachna kafi achi hai..<br />mujhe bahot achi lagi apki ye nai kavita...ap aise he achi achi kavita likha kare...ahan ke jaldi milat paree....<br />dhero subhkamnao ke sath..<br />RachRachnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01778833565266862817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-43658663302741265002009-07-02T15:40:11.767+05:302009-07-02T15:40:11.767+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Rachnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01778833565266862817noreply@blogger.com