tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post1511816524395688236..comments2011-01-20T08:21:09.708+05:30Padmanabh (आदि यायावर)http://www.blogger.com/profile/00743001936020943683noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-43491923619077043312011-01-20T08:21:09.708+05:302011-01-20T08:21:09.708+05:30Padha Kar bahut achha lagaa.<br /><br />MadanMohan TarunMadanMohanTarunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09706637551028277427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-9649615230278129902010-12-05T22:44:44.419+05:302010-12-05T22:44:44.419+05:30वहुत ही सुन्दर प्रस्तुति। मेरे व्लाग पर आपका आमंत्रण है।प्रेम सरोवरhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17150324912108117630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-82558423612874116362010-10-24T11:12:57.991+05:302010-10-24T11:12:57.991+05:30Bahut Sundar, Bilkul Yatharthvadi Kavita<br />I Like It Dear!!!!!!!Rajiv Ranjanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06715420265457290534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-80378883072022309022010-08-30T22:39:22.977+05:302010-08-30T22:39:22.977+05:30subhashji, Bimb nik aachi muda bhakhak vichar karu. Kichu adhayayanak aavayashak achhi.Kavitak katek vidhan aa vitan chhaik. Okar bandhan san mukta bh mukatak bh sakait achchi. Paranch Prabhavotpadakta kam bh jait achchi.<br /><br />Subhashji. Kripaya batabi je Comment kona maithili mei likhiRAJEEV SAAMnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-86443434875425784242010-08-09T23:32:20.581+05:302010-08-09T23:32:20.581+05:30bad neek likhle chiyae.mridula pradhanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10665142276774311821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-89306128359807531772010-08-05T13:22:41.276+05:302010-08-05T13:22:41.276+05:30यह तो बहुत अच्छी रचना है...<br />________________________<br />&#39;पाखी की दुनिया&#39; में &#39;लाल-लाल तुम बन जाओगे...&#39;Akshita (Pakhi)http://www.blogger.com/profile/06040970399010747427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-25515833696756604432010-03-10T14:51:24.552+05:302010-03-10T14:51:24.552+05:30यथार्थ विषय, साधु चित्रण, मारक व्यंग्य ! श्री संतोष मिश्र जी कें महीन साहित्यिक टिपण्णी हेतु धन्यवाद !! मुदा हमरा एहि कविता में &#39;वर्ग-विभाजन&#39; नहि परंच विभाजित वर्गाक विडम्बनाक स्वर प्रतीत होएत अछि !! ख़ास कए माध्यम वर्गक विडम्बना &#39;तर धरती नहि ऊपर वज्र...&#39; !!<br />सुन्दर रचना ! साधुवाद !!!करण समस्तीपुरीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10531494789610910323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-58948226659274975792010-03-10T12:44:48.714+05:302010-03-10T12:44:48.714+05:30ओ उगैत छैथ, बढे छैथ.<br />मोन में आबे से करैत छैथ.<br />भाव जीवनक लैत छैथ.<br />नीक जकां लिखैत छैथ.<br /><br />बड़ नीक कविता ..... बढ़िया शब्दावली. मोन घेवर घेवर भय गेल.<br />संदीप (पंकज)<br />लुधियानाSANDEEP KUMARhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01037024489150067588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-36548744747524701792010-03-10T09:30:05.165+05:302010-03-10T09:30:05.165+05:30Dear Subhash ji,<br /><br />aaha ke ee je chhot, paigh aa maddhayam barga ke lok ke bare me likhane chhi: -<br /><br />kabita silpagat rup sa nik chhai.<br /><br />ek tham matre rhythm tutai chhi.<br /><br />mudha karmake pradhanta ke aawashyak mahasus hoi chhai.<br /><br />Regards<br /><br />Santosh Kr. MishraSantosh Kr. Mishranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15885037.post-57097664182310982952010-03-09T23:32:58.403+05:302010-03-09T23:32:58.403+05:30बड नीक लागल ई व्यंग्यात्मक रचना पढि कय।मनोज कुमारhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08566976083330111264noreply@blogger.com